miércoles, 9 de abril de 2008

letter correction.

IPN, ESCA.
Carpio 471
Col. Plutarco Elias Calles.
www.escasto.ipn.mx


Mr. Hershey
Company Hershey.
E.E.U.U.


April-8th-2008.

Dear Mr. Hershey.
Opinion on their company.

My dear sr. Hershey, I believe that it is not a good idea to sell the company of chocolates since this had given many people the possibility of growth. I think that all those people to those that the company had helped could contribute with its ideas and manpower to save the company.
It is worldwide a grateful company and it deserves to remain inside the competitive market.


Thank you for their attention and I hope to have news soon of you.



ROXY

Roxanna Lopez Hernandez.
Student of business.
Enc.

1 comentario:

Brenda LoPotro dijo...

April-8th-2008.April 8, 2008

My dear sr. Hershey - Dear Mr. Hershey:

Thank you for their attention - Thank you for your...

Your letter would be better if you had used more facts to support your position.